Friday, November 6, 2009

COMPARISON CONTRAS ESSAY_ MODEL



Take a look at the two students.
List the differences and similarities they could have.

11 Comments:

Blogger Nora said...

She has studied so hard
he didn`t do enough effort to get his goals.

She probably got her family support and he didn`t (economic and affective way).

November 6, 2009 at 2:35 PM  
Blogger Alice said...

Differences:
* She has studied and got her mayor, whereas, he is in the streets
* She is happy on her achieved goal on the other hand, he is sad (obviously, but I think it was worth to say)
*As Nora said, he doesn´t have anybody (is in the little chart he has besides him) and probably she has friends and family to support her
*Maybe she had more opportunities and possibilities in her life than him

Similarities:
*They´re both persons, therefore they surely have dreams and goals...
I can´t not think on another similarity...^^

November 6, 2009 at 7:17 PM  
Blogger norberto said...

The fisrt person probably took wrong decisions during his life bacause of that hi is now in the streets.

The second person study and finish the university with hornor and a big future wait for her.

similarities:

both persons born with the same opportunities but everything depends on what kind of decisions take during the life.

November 8, 2009 at 7:25 AM  
Blogger HaDa said...

I think the similarities are that:
- they are both young people,
-they have the same rigths because they are humans

and the differences for me:
- She was born in a house with a good family
- He doesnt have a family, maybe her parents abandoned him in the street
- She has the opportunity to study because she didnt have to work
- He doesnt study, because he doesnt have time, he need to work for him

November 8, 2009 at 10:27 AM  
Blogger Eduardo said...

First of all, the similarities they have are:
-Both, the girl and the boy are persons who have dreams, goals, plan, etc
- They would like to be successful person.
- They want to be professional person.

On the other hand, the diferences about them are:
- The girl has the support form her parents, whereas the boy does not.

- The girl is getting one of her goals(graduating). As opposed to the guy who is waiting for an opportunity to graduate.

- He was born in a poor family that did not give the neccesary resources, contrary to the girl who was born in a good family that give her everything.

- The guy looks dissapointed because he has gotten his goal yet, conversely the girl who has already graduated.
- He looks disorganized because he wears informal, dirty clothes. Contrary to the girl who looks elegant wearing a formal dress.

November 9, 2009 at 9:16 AM  
Blogger Nelly said...

I think some similaraties and differences we find in both pictures are:
- They both are young people with the same rights and obligations, but maybe they don´t have the same opportunities.

- They have the same capacity to reach their objectives, but they don´t have the same dreams or goals.

- Maybe They both have access to education, but they don´t find the same encourage or support to develop a career.

- Maybe he made bad choices about life and felt into drug addictions, while she made the best choices building on the best way her life.

November 9, 2009 at 10:19 AM  
Blogger shredder said...

Similiraties:

They have similar cognitive abilities.

they have goals.

they are talented.

Differences.

The girl had econmic support from their parents, the guy probably not.

the girl had other oportunities that the guy hadn´t( a house, travel to other countries, parents love)

November 9, 2009 at 12:14 PM  
Blogger ♥ Xochilth ♥ said...

Differences:

1- He is a homeless.
2- She has a family, which has sopported her.
3- He has not studied.
4- She has gotten her major.
5- He looks so sad.
6- She looks really happy.

Similarities:

1- They are young people.
2- Everyone of they have the right to Education, but just the girl took advantages on it.
3- The boy and the girl have dreams and goals to reach in their lives.

November 9, 2009 at 6:27 PM  
Blogger Maira said...

DIFFERENCES:

* He is poor
* He is hungry, homeless and sick
(that´s what the ad says)
* He doesn´t have the opportunity to study a
major

* She has more economical possibilities to
buy or study what she wants
* She has a house, family and she looks
healthy

SIMILARITIES:

* Both have dreams and goals.
(I think this is a similiraty in every
human around the world, because having
dreams is what make us continue living,
working or studying, to be someone in the
future and be happy)

November 10, 2009 at 10:26 AM  
Blogger Roberto said...

DIFFERENCES:
- He´s out on the street
- He´s helpless
- He hasn´t had the same oportunities as the girl has.
- She´s done with one of their goals
- She has her family support.
- She has taken advantages on her oportunities.


SIMILARITIES:
- They both have oportunities on each of their lives.
- They both need someone´s support.
- They both are able to succeed.

November 10, 2009 at 11:30 AM  
Blogger Eliu said...

DIFFERENCES:
I. As everybody said: She has a big opportunity to get whatever she want, because as the picture show us, she has a lot of money.

II. He is a poor person, and probably he doesn't have family support.

III. She finished her studies and got her goals.

IV. He probably did`t take adventage of the opportunity to study.


SIMILARITIES:

I. They are young people.

II. Both of them had the opporunity to be asuccessful person.

III. The two guys have the right of Education

IV. Maybe at the begining both of them had the same goals.

November 10, 2009 at 2:17 PM  

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