Tuesday, September 22, 2009

Your silence.

To be by your side is like...to know a deep silence,
the silence of the night, the silence of the forest.
I watched the storms that were inside you,
for the lightning of your eyes.
I felt the fire coming from your soul,
because you set my whole self on fire.

To be with you was like living in a daydream,
pieces of my heart were taken when you were gone..
but pieces of your silence remain with me.

Edited by Marisol

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4 Comments:

Blogger Marisol Alvarenga_Guzmán said...

What a passionate poem!!!

September 22, 2009 at 5:42 PM  
Blogger Nora said...

wow!! my friend... what were you thinking!!! (do not answer this... I will guess... your secret love)
it is such a nice poem!!!!

September 23, 2009 at 3:57 PM  
Blogger Alice said...

wow!! I really liked your poem!! I think it is so simple, but so deep and intense. I think the comparisons you´ve done are beautiful.

September 23, 2009 at 8:08 PM  
Blogger Guillermo Antonio said...

Hey my friend that´s a nice poem; You should write and publish more.

September 30, 2009 at 2:16 PM  

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