Wednesday, September 2, 2009

Poems: similes, metaphores, sensory details...












Detail of Hieroglyph, a hammered copper sculpture by O. V. Shaffer in the courtyard of the Madison Public Library on West Mifflin Street . The sculpture has been there since the building opened in 1964.

POEM
(untitled)
Insomnia struggled to fix a painting, the painting of a life,
Some traces that hurt…

First, it installed a screen: the landscape seen through the bedroom window
But it couldn’t heal the open wounds.

Second, it tried again with natural warm drops directly from it´s own eyes.

Impossible to erase the scars!

Marisol

1 Comments:

Blogger Alice said...

I really liked this poem, I believe it is very intense specially the last part, the warm drops part...

September 7, 2009 at 8:50 AM  

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